I must say that it's nicely done. But some crits, though. There should be more shading and in the dress and hilight in the hair to make it more detailed.
But that's just my idea. You don't have to take me seriously.
The eyes are a bit low on the head tough (They should be right in the middle of the head) I would also make the face a little chubbier, she looks really really skinny now. (unless you wanted her to look that way of course) In manga/anime the width of the head is usually calculated using the width of the eyes. A head is 4 times as wide as one of the eyes, divided in half an eye of skin on the outside of the eyes, and one eye wide in between the eyes. (1/2 +1 + 1 + 1 + 1/2 = 4 eyes) Of course you can put more or less skin next to the eyes for making them look skinny or chubby...
Also a little point of comment on your outlining: it looks really neat. Maybe even a bit too neat. Dare to experiment with diffrent thicknesses of lines. Like for example, the line around the whole character would look better a little thicker, while the folds in the clothing would look more natural with a finer line.
I really love the way her hair flows and how you use diffrent colors of outlining to make the image look softer. The blooming trees in the background are simply amazing!
I don't think it's too purple, but that's my opinion, I love it when colors match!
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But that's just my idea. You don't have to take me seriously.
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The eyes are a bit low on the head tough (They should be right in the middle of the head) I would also make the face a little chubbier, she looks really really skinny now. (unless you wanted her to look that way of course) In manga/anime the width of the head is usually calculated using the width of the eyes. A head is 4 times as wide as one of the eyes, divided in half an eye of skin on the outside of the eyes, and one eye wide in between the eyes. (1/2 +1 + 1 + 1 + 1/2 = 4 eyes) Of course you can put more or less skin next to the eyes for making them look skinny or chubby...
Also a little point of comment on your outlining: it looks really neat. Maybe even a bit too neat. Dare to experiment with diffrent thicknesses of lines. Like for example, the line around the whole character would look better a little thicker, while the folds in the clothing would look more natural with a finer line.
I really love the way her hair flows and how you use diffrent colors of outlining to make the image look softer. The blooming trees in the background are simply amazing!
I don't think it's too purple, but that's my opinion, I love it when colors match!
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I love this look. So crisp.
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"I SAID DRESS THE FUCK UP"
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